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  • In Her Own Words — Celebrating Women Authors for National Women’s History Month

    Every voice is unique, and every perspective is worthy of knowing.

    Women's History Month, pink background, five women

    Women authors have always held an illustrious place in the literary world, and while their work is often talked about in terms of the advancement of women overall, many women authors have also contributed to the business of telling stories by challenging the technical conventions of writing as well as presenting a woman’s authentic experience. 

    Woman, writing, porch, columns, trees

    Storytelling is the thread that connects our societal web,
    so it’s imperative there is room for everyone.

    National Women’s History Month

    For National Women’s History Month, celebrated each year in March, Chanticleer celebrates the fantastic women who forged new literary paths and have been an extraordinary influence and joy to have in our own community. We are delighted to take this time and recognize just a few influential women authors in history.

    Enheduanna - Wikipedia
    Disc of Enheduana, Akkadian Period, circa 2300BCE

    The World’s First Author: Enheduana

    The most influential in the cannon of women authors has to be Enheduanna (circa 2300BC). A Mesopotamian high priestess, she is the world’s first named author, and she is credited with writing forty-two poems and several hymns in cuneiform on clay tablets. She used her writing to help her father, Sargon the Great, unite his empire (also the world’s first) under a shared religion. Her poem titled Exhaultation of Inana is her most famous work, but her hymns went on to set the tone, style, and form of the hymns quoted in the Bible to this day.

    You, Inanna,
    Foremost in Heaven and Earth.
    Lady riding a beast,
    You rained fire on the heads of men.
    Taking your power from the Highest,
    Following the commands of the Highest,
    Lady of all the great rites,
    Who can understand all this is yours?

    Jane Austen | Biography, Books, Movies, & Facts | Britannica

    Unwavering Social Commentary: Jane Austen

    Using writing to influence positive change is a noble endeavor. Jane Austen, (1775 – 1817) author of Sense and Sensibility and Pride and Prejudice, was an outspoken critic and commentator at a time when women had little opportunity to express their thoughts. Her books explore the strict social structure and financial instability of women born in her era. She infused her stories with irony and humor, making them digestible to a larger audience who may not agree with some of the underlying commentary within the story. Austen is credited with creating free indirect discourse, a literary style that combines third person and first person narration, giving readers access to her characters’ inner thoughts to foster intimacy and emotional bonds with the reader.

    I declare after all there is no enjoyment like reading! How much sooner one tires of any thing than of a book! — When I have a house of my own, I shall be miserable if I have not an excellent library.

    – From Pride and Prejudice

    Charlotte Bronte, pencil drawing, pink

    An Examination of Why We Are the Way We Are; Charlotte Brontë

    Writing, it can be said, is our thoughts laid bare. This idea came to life through the writing of Charlotte Brontë (1816-1855). Her most notable work, Jane Eyre, is a bildungsroman following the protagonist through her growth to adulthood. It revolutionized prose fiction by focusing on moral and spiritual development through an intimate first-person narrative, thereby exhibiting that psychological journey in the actions and events of the story. She has been called the “first historian of the private consciousness” and the literary ancestor of writers such as Marcel Proust and James Joyce.

    I am no bird; and no net ensnares me: I am a free human being with an independent will.

    – From Jane Eyre

    Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie Comes to Terms with Global Fame | The New Yorker

    Frank Authenticity in Representation; Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie

    Honesty in her depiction of her community, Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie (1977) creates prose that gets right to the heart of things, honestly and authentically. This isn’t easy when your writing includes multiple characters’ perspectives within one story. In Ngozi Adichi’s second book, Half of a Yellow Sun, she offers five points of view that tell of the brutality of the Nigerian Civil War. Her ancestral Igbo background deeply informs her writing as she explores the themes of religion, immigration, gender and culture.

    We teach girls to shrink themselves, to make themselves smaller. We say to girls, you can have ambition, but not too much. You should aim to be successful, but not too successful. Otherwise, you would threaten the man. Because I am female, I am expected to aspire to marriage. I am expected to make my life choices always keeping in mind that marriage is the most important. Now marriage can be a source of joy and love and mutual support but why do we teach girls to aspire to marriage and we don’t teach boys the same? We raise girls to see each other as competitors not for jobs or accomplishments, which I think can be a good thing, but for the attention of men. We teach girls that they cannot be sexual beings in the way that boys are.

    – From We Should All Be Feminists

    Agatha Christie: Biography, Author, Playwright, British Dame

    Sharp Intelligence Creating Intrigue; Agatha Christie

    The world’s bestselling author of fiction is mystery writer, Agatha Christie (1880-1975). Author of sixty-six detective novels, she excelled at creating stories that placed the reader in the middle of a mystery, offering them a chance to solve it as her character uncovers the clues. Her writing is known for its sharp dialogues, fast-paced narration, and clever plot twists, and her skills in misdirecting the audience on where the story goes is legendary. Christie’s smart characters and intriguing murder cases makes her one of the best in the genre, even to this day.

    It’s no good starting out by thinking one is a heaven-born genius—some people are, but very few. No, one is a tradesman—a tradesman in a good honest trade. You must learn the technical skills, and then, within that trade, you can apply your own creative ideas; but you must submit to the discipline of form.

    – From An Autobiography 

    These are just a very few of the influential women writers we celebrate during National Women’s Month. In paying tribute, we acknowledge that storytelling is a human endeavor. Not one to be carried by a single group of writers, but rather a tool of self-expression that needs participation from all facets of society so that we can better relate to one another, learn from one another, and continue to grow as a society.


    Chanticleer is proud to represent amazing women authors!

    Celebrate women authors during National Women’s History Month
    by picking up one of the novels written by these authors! 

    Exostar Cover

    Exostar

    It has been said that “the Golden Age of Science Fiction is twelve.” Rae Knightly’s Sci-Fi adventure, Exostar, embodies this childlike sense of wonder that the best of the genre evokes in its readers.

    Twelve-year-old child-robot Trinket takes off on a rocketing spaceship straight towards danger and excitement, with the mostly able assistance of the blue-furred spy and saboteur Woolver Talandrin. Trinket is searching for identity—as all the best young science fiction protagonists do. Woolver is trying to bring down an evil empire—as all the other best science fiction protagonists do.

    Together they’ve been thrust into the kind of epic tale that is guaranteed to keep young readers on the edge of their seats—including the twelve-year-old that lurks inside every science fiction fan.

    Read more here…

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    Portrait of a Feminist

    Marianne Marlowe’s memoir, Portrait of a Feminist, reveals the evolution of her feminism through a collection of thought-provoking essays.

    “I would say, if it were possible, I was born a feminist” is at the heart of Marlowe’s story. She relates to this defining identity throughout years spent in Peru, California, and Ecuador, where she navigates childhood, marriage, motherhood, and a professional career.

    The section titles reflect periods in Marlowe’s life that correspond to nature’s rhythms—“Seeds Planted”, “The Growing Years”, “Maturation”, and “Harvesting”—and maintain strong connections between her thematically-linked experiences.

    As a Peruvian American woman, Marlowe navigates the concepts of gender, race, and culture from a personal and critical point of view.

    Read more here…

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    Shelter in a Hostile World

    Shelter in a Hostile World, second installment in Mack Little’s Love and Peace series, is an epic tale of resistance, desire, and tragedy, saturating readers in the complexity of Igbo culture.

    Little paints a character-rich portrait of the horrors of enslavement and the unthinkable violence against women in the Caribbean, locking people together in relationships molded by adversity.

    Set in 17th century Igboland—the invaded region of Nigeria — and on the island of Barbados, Shelter in a Hostile World is a searingly brief novel packed with mesmerizing prose. It blends genres to create a literary language entirely its own.

    Read more here…

    Sea Tigers and Merchants

    Two families vie for power in mercantile 18th-century Salem. Sea Tigers and Merchants, the second book in Sandra Wagner-Wright’sSalem Stories series, returns to a world of treacherous storms, tantalizing wealth, and the demands of high society on its children.

    Elias Hasket Derby, Sr. has kept his promise to his wife Eliza—they rule Salem. Hasket’s merchant ships bring in great fortune, while Eliza holds court as the most influential woman in the city’s social spheres. And their ambitions have grown to meet their station. Hasket launches his riskiest endeavor—the Grand Turk,a ship so massive she’s nearly too heavy to be pulled out of the docks. Meanwhile Eliza, snubbed by George Washington’s stay at another family’s mansion, insists they build a house so grand it will put all others to shame.

    Such success, of course, draws the envious eye of Hasket’s competitor.

    Read more here…

    If Two Are Dead Cover

    If Two Are Dead

    An enigmatic raven-haired beauty mysteriously murdered and cast into a stranger’s grave, left for scurrilous resurrection men to uncover in the dark of night! In Jeanne Matthews’s historical mystery If Two Are Dead, Detectives Quinn Paschal and Gabriel Garnick take up this case of vicious murder and ignite a mire of secrets and resentment at the pinnacle of 1867 Chicago society.

    After catching the body-snatchers in the act of stealing a freshly buried corpse to sell for medical research, Quinn and Garnick realize the body found in Emmett Buck’s grave is by no means that of a young man, but that of a woman, whose bloody head and clean clothes point to a complex mystery. With only her appearance and some identifying jewelry, Quinn insists they can and will catch the killer of ‘Marietta A.V.’ Enlisting the help of an unscrupulous journalist, they locate her husband, a wealthy and influential doctor.

    The woman’s husband, Dr. Horace E. Vinings, offers them an incredible reward if they can find Marietta’s killer. But Quinn and Garnick suspect he might not like the answer he receives.

    Read more here…


     

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  • BEATS & CONFLICT: The Engine for Your Book — A Chanticleer Writing Toolbox Primer Article by David Beaumier

    BEATS & CONFLICT: The Engine for Your Book — A Chanticleer Writing Toolbox Primer Article by David Beaumier

    Structure, Conflict, & Beats — Bringing it All Together

    Conflict is key to any story. Even if the stakes are low and the show is purportedly about nothing, like in Seinfeld, the characters are motivated and pushed through new changes. As writers continually produce work, we are always revisiting the ways in which we understand writing.

    Kramer, George, Elaine, and Jerry from the TV show Seinfeld
    The Cast of Seinfeld – A Series about Nothing

    One of the newest, most popular writing craft books is Jessica Brody’s Save the Cat! Writes a Novel, which promises to be the last book you’ll ever need for novel writing, but one can never have too many books, especially on craft.

    At Chanticleer, We Love to See Story Come to Life

    The biggest feedback we give to authors in our Awards or for our Editorial Reviews is that, while the story was well-written and error-free, there was not much actual story that happened in it. For that reason, we always recommend that authors commit to a Manuscript Overview to make sure they’re heading in the right direction with their Work in Progress. Read more about those here.

    So We’re Talking About Dialogue Beats Here?

    If you’re interested in making your dialogue sing, that’s wonderful, and we recommend you do work to make sure all that interstitial tissue in your book is doing what it needs to do, but this toolbox article will focus on the overarching structure questions in terms of beats. If you’re interested in reading more about dialogue mechanics this article here from Margie Lawson has some great suggestions on language and beats!

    Beats not beets!
    Beats not beets!

    We Are Talking About Conflict

    Conflict is the engine that motivates a book. It doesn’t need to be zombies coming to destroy the world, but it has to be your main character’s desire for change (which often isn’t really their true desire at the start of the story). What we’re going to look at here is the way characters are motivated and approach the ending theme as they move through the book.

    Save the Cat really shines in the way it points out that characters are often given the answer to all their life’s troubles early on, but they resist it throughout the story. One great example is Benjamin Sisko at the start of Star Trek: DS9.

    When Sisko arrives on Deep Space Nine to take command of the station, all he wants is to keep running from the past with his son Jake. He doesn’t realize that this assignment is the beginning of his journey to healing from the terrible trauma of losing his wife two years ago. All the tools are there for him to create a home where he is, but he doesn’t understand this until maybe Season 5 of the show, and by that point, his desires have totally morphed in response to the environment he found himself in.

    At least Season 4 Benjamin Sisko sitting at his desk in his Starfleet Uniform
    Captain Benjamin Sisko of Deep Space Nine (of the Star Trek Universe)

    As Sisko moves from season to season, we see each point of growth and story structure as beats from which he grows and changes.

    Story Structure as Beats

    First off, what are beats?

    Think about white space in a sketch for a painting. All the lines that make up the body of the work are the dialogue of your piece–it gives the plot, characters, and conflict a structure to work within. The beats are the color that fills it in, showing the reader a complete picture of what’s taking place. As you write, ask yourself if you’re better at overwriting and then trimming back or underwriting and fleshing out. Play to your strengths for your first draft, and then come back ready to adjust for any areas you know you’ll be weak.

    Worth Repeating

    As you write, ask yourself if you’re better at overwriting and then trimming back or underwriting and fleshing out. Play to your strengths for your first draft, and then come back ready to adjust for any areas you know you’ll be weak. David B.

    Let’s look at the overall structure of a book

    Let’s start out with Save the Cat. In this book, Brody breaks out most plots to follow the following Structure:

    • Opening Image
    • Theme Stated
    • Catalyst
    • Break into 2
    • B Story
    • Midpoint
    • All is Lost
    • Break into 3
    • Final Image

    Each of these big sections is subdivided into categories based on how many scenes move it forward, which are further defined as multi-scene beats or single scene beats. Some of them are obvious, like the Opening Image and Closing Image tend to be a single scene beat where we get in and fulfill that need for the writing, and then get out. While most of these make sense just by glancing at them (or you can figure out that Catalyst is another way of saying The Inciting Incident), here’s a quick guide to some of the wonkier names from Save the Cat.

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    Break Into 2 & Break Into 3

    This refers to Acts 2 and 3 of your story. Brody focuses on the 3 Act structure for novel writing, which does fit the majority of work out there. For differing ideas on how to structure a book, be sure to check out our article here.

    The focus for the Break Into parts is on marking a clear delineation between your Acts. An example Brody uses is Jane Eyre, with Act I being her mistreatment and time at school, Act II being her role as governess for Mr. Rochester, and Act III being her escape from St. John and return to Mr. Rochester as an independent woman.

    B Story

    Often the introduction of B Story introduces the character who will help your protagonist learn the theme or lesson that they will need in order to grow properly by the end of the story. They are a helper-character who represents the new world of Act II that your main character enters. Keeping with Jane Eyre, Mr. Rochester is a foil to Jane’s meekness that forces her to stand up for herself and push back against his rude brashness, pushing her to change.

    Jane Eyre and Mr. Rochester about to kiss
    Mia Wasikowska and Michael Fassbender in the 2011 Jane Eyre film – Charlotte Bronte 1847

    Clear as Mud?

    Rather than write out all of Save the Cat, Jessica Brody has already mostly done it for you here. And Brody isn’t alone in having great ideas of how to look at the intersection of conflict and structure!

    Click on the link above to read more about Brody’s 15 Beats of Story Telling. We are not affiliates of Brody or Wolf 359, but we are passionate about sharing the best tools with Chanticleerians. Kiffer

    There is a wonderful breakdown of story structure that is quite similar written by Gabriel Urbina to describe the story structure for the brilliant SciFi podcast Wolf 359, written by Urbina, Sarah Shachat, and Zach Valenti. You can read his breakdown of the story structure here and learn more about Wolf 359 here.

    Our own Jessica Morrell, of course, has a brilliant take on Story that focuses more on different aspects such as character, structure, and plot which can be found here.

    Beat Sheets Will Meet You Where You Are

    The great thing about this tool is you can use it to plot out the work you’re planning or to analyze the work that you have. Brody’s cheat sheet linked above even offers general percentages on how long each section of the Save the Cat structure should take. Remember that different genres have different typical lengths, and keep those lengths in mind as your write and plot. And, as always, the work is yours; these are just guidelines, not hard and fast rules for success.

    Be sure to get more than your eyes on the work! Beta readers and friends are great, but nothing beats a professional Manuscript Overview you can get from Chanticleer.


    Chanticleer Editorial Services – when you are ready

    Did you know that Chanticleer offers editorial services? We do and have been doing so since 2011.

    Tools of the Editing Trade

    Our professional editors are top-notch and are experts in the Chicago Manual of Style. They have and are working for the top publishing houses (TOR, McMillian, Thomas Mercer, Penguin Random House, Simon Schuster, etc.).

    If you would like more information, we invite you to email Kiffer or Sharon at KBrown@ChantiReviews.com or SAnderson@ChantiReviews.com for more information, testimonials, and fees.

    We work with a small number of exclusive clients who want to collaborate with our team of top editors on an ongoing basis. Contact us today!

    Chanticleer Editorial Services also offers writing craft sessions and masterclasses. Sign up to find out where, when, and how sessions being held.

    A great way to get started is with our manuscript evaluation service. Here are some handy links about this tried and true service: https://www.chantireviews.com/manuscript-reviews/

    And we do editorial consultations. for $75.  https://www.chantireviews.com/services/Editorial-Services-p85337185

    Writer’s Toolbox

    Thank you for reading this Chanticleer Writer’s Toolbox article.

    Writers Toolbox Helpful Links: 

    Rhythm and Cadence and Beats, Oh Yes! by Margie Lawson

    Understanding Story Structure by David Beaumier

    How to Write Your Novel Using the Save the Cat Beat Sheet

    10 Point Story Structure

    COMPONENT LAYERS of SUCCESSFUL FICTION by Jessica Morrell 

    The traditional publishing tool that indie authors can use to propel their writing careers to new levels?  https://www.chantireviews.com/2016/05/15/the-seven-must-haves-for-authors-unlocking-the-secrets-of-successful-publishing-series-by-kiffer-brown/