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  • Memorial Day 2021– Remembering our History and Honoring Those Who Died in Service by Kiffer Brown & David Beaumier

    Memorial Day 2021– Remembering our History and Honoring Those Who Died in Service by Kiffer Brown & David Beaumier

    Memorial Day is a federal holiday in the USA to honor and remember those who died in service to our nation. The date of the holiday changes but it always falls on the last Monday of May.

    The United States has three official days to honor those who serve or have served in the Armed Forces.

    1. Memorial Day, a federal holiday, is observed the last Monday in May, honors those who have lost their lives in action in service to our nation.
    2. Veterans Day, a federal holiday, that is observed every year on November 11th to honor all those who have served in the Armed Forces.
    3. Armed Forces Day is a celebration day that honors all active and former personnel across the six branches of the United States military. It is celebrated on the third Saturday of every May. This year’s (2021) was on May 15.

    [Note from Kiffer Brown: As a military brat, I want to pass on the importance of understanding the difference of these three very important days are to military personnel and to their families and loved ones. Thank you]

    National Moment of Remembrance

    On Memorial Day, remember that there is a National Moment of Remembrance. To honor the moment, pause for one minute at 3 p.m. at your local time, and remember those who have died in service to this nation.

    Second Lieutenant Billy Wayne Flynn was killed in action, Vietnam, January 23, 1967. He was 24 years old. (He gave to me my first book of poetry before he left for Vietnam. I still have it. Kiffer Brown)

    History of Memorial Day

    All of us at Chanticleer have family who have served, and that makes holidays like Memorial Day important to us. We ask you to take time out of your day to remember the veterans in your life and those who have died in active service on this day of reflection.

    A Green sketch of Robert Gerard Beaumier Sr. Shared herfor Memorial Day with the family's permission
    Robert Gerard Beaumier Sr. who served in WWII

    My father would often tell the story of how his grandfather, Robert, was in France during World War II. At one point a dog came and wouldn’t stop barking at his unit, no matter how much they told it to go away. Finally, Robert said “Va t’en!” and immediately the dog ran off. Everyone was suitably impressed that the dog spoke French!

    Memorial Day Started in the Wake of the Civil War

    Memorial Day began to be celebrated when the United States was split in two during the Civil War, as the Confederate States seceded from the United States in order to continue to preserve the institution of enslaving people.

    The Civil War ended on May 5, 1868, and three years later Major General John Logan formalized that Decoration Day (the original name of Memorial Day) should be on May 30 (now May 31) , chosen probably because that’s when most flowers would bloom across most of the country.

     

    Black and white photo of John Logan
    John Logan went on to become a senator for Illinois

    The Civil War remains the bloodiest conflict in terms of US life, with 620,000-750,000 dying throughout its four years. You can see the VA’s (Veteran Affairs) full list of statistics here, and it shows just how long the US has been at war for 245 years we have been a country. After the first World War, Memorial Day officially became more in recognition of all veterans who died serving the US. You can read more about the history of Memorial Day here.

    For a long time, people have recognized and honored those who died in war. There’s a record of Pericles (429 B.C.), a statesman in Athens stating:

    A sculpture of Pericles in front of a red background

    Not only are they commemorated by columns and inscriptions, but there dwells also an unwritten memorial of them, graven not on stone but in the hearts of men. ~ Pericles of Athens

    Quotes from some of our favorite notable authors:

    “Patriotism is supporting your country all the time, and your government when it deserves it.“–Mark Twain

    “How important it is for us to recognize and celebrate our heroes and she-roes!” – Maya Angelou

    “A hero is someone who has given his or her life to something bigger than oneself.” —Joseph Campbell

    Remembering those who have served and made the ultimate sacrifice….


    Without further ado, the following are recent reviews of books with a military theme that we highly recommend!

    The Stories of Veterans and about Those Who Died in Action Matter

    We review and award several books each year that have to do with military service. Oftentimes, with Fiction, those books appear in our Somerset, Chatelaine, Laramie and Global Thriller Awards, and in Non-Fiction they appear in our Journey Awards. We also plan to launch a new Non-Fiction division this year that specifically honors and recognizes work with military themes.

    NO TOUGHER DUTY, NO GREATER HONOR
    By GySgt L. Christian Bussler
    First Place Winner in Journey Awards

    From a family with a long history of military service dating back to the civil war, GySgt L. Christian Bussler brings to life his experience as a Mortuary Affairs marine and sheds light on a duty that few ever talk about. He is called to duty for his first of three tours in Iraq in February of 2003 after spending many years training as a reservist.

    This fear becomes reality when he narrowly escapes an IED blast with his life. Afterward, Bussler wrestles with the guilt of going back home injured, leaving his team behind to fight without him. The final and longest section of No Tougher Duty, No Greater Honor mirrors the length of the final and longest tour from 2005-2006. This tour especially proves to be the most challenging for not just Bussler, but his whole team, and it leaves them all forever changed.

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    AWAY at WAR: A CIVIL WAR STORY of the FAMILY LEFT BEHIND
    By Nick K. Adams
    First Place Winner in Laramie Awards

    In 1861, like so many other American men, David Brainard Griffen took leave of his family and enlisted in the army, volunteering as a soldier for the Union. Also like so many other American men, he hoped he’d be home in a few months, that this Civil War would soon be over, and he’d be reunited with his wife, Minerva, his daughters, Alice, seven-years-old, Ida May, five-years-old, and his infant son, Edgar Lincoln. To minimize the pain of separation from his family, he wrote them letters from the field of battle, more than 100 accounts of what he was doing and witnessing as a 2nd Minnesota Volunteer. While the book is one of historic fiction, the letters are genuine, and the characters are based on actual people. The author of this fine account, Nick K. Adams, is the great-great-grandson of Corporal David Brainard Griffen.

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    A CROWDED HEART
    By Andrea McKenzie Raine

    Willis Hancocks survives fighting in Western Europe during World War II but faces continuing battles of the mind at war’s end in Andrea McKenzie Raine’s poignant study of the plight of the former soldier in her historical novel, A Crowded Heart.

    Willis decides to remain in London rather than return to his native Canada where his parents and sister live near Vancouver. Eager to put the war behind him, he marries Ellie, an intelligent young woman who has studied art at Cambridge University. Her affluent parents approve of Willis, and her father offers to finance his new son-in-law’s study of law at Cambridge. The newlyweds’ future could not look rosier.

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    The SEARCH (ACROSS the GREAT DIVIDE, Book II)
    By Michael L. Ross

    The Search (Across the Great Divide: Book II)by Michael L. Ross brings to life the history and events of the Westward Expansion in a post-Civil War US. In this sequel to The Clouds of War (Book I), we once again follow Will Crump, now a young Confederate Veteran, a POW survivor, and a sufferer from what must be PTSD. With the war over, nightmares and tension with the family disrupt his life and plans to marry his pre-war sweetheart. He wants to get away from civilization, build a little cabin in the mountains, and live in peace. 

    Will strikes out on his horse Dusty and soon picks up a stray dog he names Lightening. Both animals play essential roles in Will’s survival throughout his journey, and readers will worry for and root for them as much as for Will as they face the wild west head-on. 

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    The Ack Ack Girl book cover

    The ACK-ACK GIRL (Love and War #1)
    By Chris Karlsen

    Chris Karlsen’s new work, The Ack-Ack Girl, is the first in her World War II series, Love and War, and serves up plenty of story on both sides of that equation in its portrayal of Ava Armstrong, the “Ack-Ack” girl of the title. And what a story it is!

    Bombs are dropping on London in the heat and fire of the infamous Blitz. Shells are falling, as are the buildings that surround them, while fires spring up in the wake of the bombs that never seem to end. But when they finally stop, Ava and her friends are determined to get their loved ones somewhere safe and to find a way to serve up some revenge on the Germans.

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    CHASING DEMONS
    By John Hansen

    First Place Winner in Laramie Awards

    In the first several pages of Chasing Demons, a novel of the Old West not long after the American Civil War, the following happens to U.S. Army Private Gus O’Grady: he kills two Apache Indians, saves the lives of a troop of U.S. soldiers, kills two more Indians, kills a bad guy, winds up being mistaken for a man who may have robbed a bank of $20,000 in gold, and gets arrested for possibly being the man who raped a lass in an Arizona town populated by Mormons, and meets a woman he thinks is far too good for him. Oh yes, and he deserts the Army after 13 years.

    That’s just for openers.

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    Have a great story about veterans and war history?

    When you’re ready, did you know that Chanticleer offers editorial services? We do and have been doing so since 2011.

    Our professional editors are top-notch and are experts in the Chicago Manual of Style. They have and are working for the top publishing houses (TOR, McMillian, Thomas Mercer, Penguin Random House, Simon Schuster, etc.).

    If you would like more information, we invite you to email Kiffer or Sharon at KBrown@ChantiReviews.com or SAnderson@ChantiReviews.com for more information, testimonials, and fees.

    We work with a small number of exclusive clients who want to collaborate with our team of top-editors on an on-going basis. Contact us today!

    Chanticleer Editorial Services also offers writing craft sessions and masterclasses. Sign up to find out where, when, and how sessions being held.

    A great way to get started is with our manuscript evaluation service, with more information available here.

    And we do editorial consultations for $75. Learn more here.  

    If you’re confident in your book, consider submitting it for a Editorial Book Review here or to one of our Chanticleer International Awards here.

    Also remember! We’re hosting our 2020 CIBA Ceremonies for First Place Category and Grand Prize Winners June 5th at the Hotel Bellwether in Beautiful Bellingham, Wash. Attending the June 5, 2021 VIRTUAL Ceremonies for the 2020 CIBAs is Free. However,  registration is required. We will have the link posted on our website after the Finalists are announced.

    Thank you to veterans everywhere!

  • UNTIL MORNING COMES by Jonathan Epps – True Crime Thriller, Vigilante Justice Thriller, Conspiracy Thrillers

    UNTIL MORNING COMES by Jonathan Epps – True Crime Thriller, Vigilante Justice Thriller, Conspiracy Thrillers

    Jonathan Epps pulls from the darkest corners of our headlines a tale most despicable in his latest novel, Until Morning Comes.

    Young girls seldom know the dark, wicked places awaiting them in the world, but they do have real problems. They come from hard-scrabble backgrounds and make destructive decisions because they want something more for themselves. These girls don’t know how to get what they desire, only without a doubt, each one understands they need something so much bigger – so much better than what life currently offers, and they will believe anyone – and do anything – to attain it.

    In short, they become targets for predators.

    The very rich and the celebrated take what they want from these girls and leave them worse off than ever. It’s those people who should know better but don’t care. They hire people to hunt down these girls, profit from them, and promise a future that never comes to fruition, then discard them like trash.

    The girls participate in sordid parties for the uber-wealthy, famous, even celebrated elite who enjoy perpetrating illicit and disturbing actions upon the underaged and vulnerable. They take their pleasure in places where drugs never run dry, and consent is deemed optional. Lots of money changes hands, and some of it even makes its way to a few girls. But at one of these events, Ava witnesses a most deplorable act, and instead of helping the girl, she runs away. She can’t forgive herself. Ava’s haunted by the sights, sounds, and smells of that night, and her hatred grows for the people who perpetrated these offenses.

    Ava forms friendships with two others, and they all try to move on. Each one deals with the lingering trauma in different ways. The other two begin to piece together plans for the present, hoping they can eventually set goals for happy futures. But Ava fails in all her attempts. She can’t move on from her past. She can’t move on from the horrific scene she ran from, and so she puts together a plan for revenge.

    Ava Rose Anderson decides to put an end to the group.

    Why? Simple. She has nothing left to lose. Ava seeks revenge for herself and for all those who suffer the aftermath of the life they once lived. She challenges the offenders with exposure of their crimes – and she’s determined to fight that nightmare to the bitter end.

    Revenge may give Ava closure, if not peace. Ultimately, she wants to face the man who ran the trafficking operation. She wants to see him dead. Also, she wants to face off with the woman who recruited her – and so many like her. Ava hunts her targets through media and across a couple of major cities to trap the human trafficking ring. She doesn’t know it, but Ava is not the only person on this trail. Who will reach them first, and how will it all end?

    Jonathan Epps masterfully develops his latest thriller with public figures we all recognize from today’s headlines. True crime and thriller fans alike will find Until Morning Comes riveting and simply impossible to put down.

     

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  • CIBA Grand Prize, First Place, Short Stories, and Fiction Series 2020 WINNERS Announcement Schedule for Saturday, June 5th , 2021

    CIBA Grand Prize, First Place, Short Stories, and Fiction Series 2020 WINNERS Announcement Schedule for Saturday, June 5th , 2021

    We are honored and excited to announce the Chanticleer International Book Awards 2020 Grand Prize, Division Grand Prize, First Place, Short Stories, and Fiction Series WINNERS on Saturday, June 5, 2021 – LIVE from the Hotel Bellwether, Bellingham, Washington State.

    The 2020 CIBA announcements will be made LIVE at this hybrid event on ZOOM with our Local Unusual Suspects on Saturday, June 5, 2021! 

    Due to Covid-19 re-opening phase that we are currently in, we are limiting the number of LIVE attendees to twenty-five people including Chanticleer staff. If you would like to attendee in person, and have been vaccinated, please email Kiffer at KBrown@ChantiReviews.com for more information.

    The event will be ZOOMed LIVE and all are welcome to participate. However, registration is required so that we may email you the private ZOOM link.

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    The 2020 CIBA Ceremonies Schedule – Saturday, June 5th, 2021

    Opening Ceremony and Remarks – half past two o’clock in the afternoon Pacific Standard Time (Seattle/LAX/Vancouver)

    All genre division and non-fiction FINALISTS will be recognized at the 2020 CIBA Ceremony and then we announce the First Place Award Winners.

    Celebrate with us and Cheer On Your Favorite Authors with your fav bubbly! As always with our virtual events, we try to make the 2020 CIBAs Ceremonies as interactive as possible.

    Since this is a LIVE event, the rest of the schedule times are approximate but we will follow the order below. Thank you for understanding.

    We look forward to gathering in person for the 2021 CIBAs that will take place at the 2022 Chanticleer Authors Conference, April 7 – 10, 2022.

    • Please click on the links below to see whose works advanced to the Premier Finalist Level of Achievement for the 2020 CIBAs.
    • Please NOTE:  We are emailing the ZOOM link to all of the Finalists for the 2020 CIBA Ceremonies that will be held on Saturday, June 5, 2021. 
    • If you are not a Finalist in the 2020 CIBAs, but would like to watch the event, please email Chanticleer’s Author Outreach director, David at DBeaumier@ChantiReviews. Please put June 5 CIBA in the Subject Line of your email.
    • Also, please visit our Chanticleer Reviews Facebook webpage for the Facebook Live event.

    3:00 p.mCIBAs for Out of This World Divisions

    3:30 p.m.  Get a CLUE CIBA Divisions

    4:00 p.m. The CIBA Historical Fiction Divisions

    4:30 p.m. The CIBA Young Readers Fiction Divisions 

    5:00 p.m. The CIBA Fiction Awards 

    5:30 p.m. CIBA Non-Fiction Works

    6:00 p.m. CIBA Short Stories & Novellas and the Fiction Series Awards

    Grand Prize Ribbons! and First Place Ribbons

    6:30 p.m. Announcing the 2020 Grand Prize Winners of the 23 Chanticleer International Book Awards and the Overall Grand Prize Winner  of the 2020 CIBAs

    Whose work will take home the Best Book Grand Prize? The excitement builds!

    All of the 2020 CIBA Grand Prize Winners will have a chance to accept their awards virtually if in attendance.

    We look forward to seeing you virtually at 2020 CIBA Ceremonies on Saturday, June 5, 2021

    Welcome and Announcements begin at 2:30 p.m. Pacific Standard Time. Premier Finalists please look for your email with the ZOOM link. 

    Ceremonies will also be on Facebook Live. If you are not a Finalist but would like to attend the ZOOMed event, please email DBeaumier@ChantiReviews.com,  Author Outreach.

    Please click here for more information regarding the 2021 CIBAs. Don’t Delay! Enter Today!

    CAC22 – The Chanticleer Authors Conference and 2021 CIBA Ceremony is scheduled for April 7 -10, 2022! It will be the 10th CAC event!  

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  • A DIVINE WIND by Norman M. Jacobs MD, MS – Technothrillers, Literature and Fiction, Environmental Thrillers

    A DIVINE WIND by Norman M. Jacobs MD, MS – Technothrillers, Literature and Fiction, Environmental Thrillers

    A Divine Wind by Norman M. Jacobs MD, MS is a technothriller that will keep readers glued in their seats until the last page is read.

    Working in secret, one government experiments with technology that allows them complete control over the weather. If the user guides the technology with a heavy hand, the weather will strike like a weapon; likewise, if those at the control wield compassion, calm weather that nourishes the land will result. Calculated strategies could deploy storms against one’s foes. Of course, any intentions to channel the weather for good may produce scattered, unintended, and deadly consequences. There’s an old saying, “An ill wind may blow nobody any good.” However, a divine wind may unite people if they don’t kill one another first.

    Doron Ben Avrahim suffered significant losses in his life. At just eight years old, his parents died in the 9/11 Twin Towers attacks. The young and devastated Doron journeys to Israel, becoming a ward of his relatives. Now Israeli army lieutenant Doron is captured in Iran. It happens just one week before his wedding. On the day of the arrest, Sarah, his beloved fiancé, tried on her wedding dress. Life offered Doron nothing except Sarah. All joy had forsaken him as a child, and six months into his captivity, if not for Sarah, he didn’t care if he lived or died. Then a tornado sweeps into Iran and changes everything.

    Everyone wants to know what happened and why.

    High-ranking officials in the United States, including the President and Vice President, develop curiosity about the strange weather events in the Middle East. Governments around the world press for information. What happened? Was it an artificial event? Who did it? Can the technology be duplicated? And, how can we get our hands on it? Israeli officials, driven by their people’s plight of living under constant threat of annihilation, want to keep the technology secret. It makes no sense to share it with the world.

    Can there ever be peace?

    As governments of the world do what governments do best – investigate, interrogate, and spy on one another, the world’s citizens learn of a unique family that crossed borders. These people have learned about what can unite them and how they can all dream of a better world. Once they envision it, they believe they can create it. Can a foundation be built on a dream, or will it crumble under the winds of change?

    Author Norman M. Jacobs, a physician/scientist, builds his plot on a most intriguing premise: the ability to alter weather patterns and control specific storms at will. The theoretical science, including its eventual and significant butterfly effect, develops in a most fascinating and approachable way, leaving readers imagining the likelihood of such a tool’s viability in our world today.

    A Divine Wind begins at a heart-pounding, thrilling pace, as any technothriller should. Jacobs then weaves historical events into his characters’ lives, bringing depth and empathy for what shapes their actions. Here, Jacobs allows us a glimpse into the communities and destinies of two cultures and questions their futures. In the end, we ask the all-important, sobering question, can there ever be peace? Ultimately, Jacobs delivers an intelligent technothriller far too close to home to be anything else but highly recommended!

     

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  • ODYSSEY of LOVE: A Memoir of Seeking and Finding by Linda Jämsén – Eastern European Travel, Biographies and Memoirs of Women, Travel and Adventure Biographies

    ODYSSEY of LOVE: A Memoir of Seeking and Finding by Linda Jämsén – Eastern European Travel, Biographies and Memoirs of Women, Travel and Adventure Biographies

     

    Odyssey of Love: A Memoir of Seeking and Finding by Linda Jämsén is an utterly charming Eastern European take on Eat – Pray – Love

    This odyssey begins with its 40-something author exchanging her job and dead-end relationship in Boston for two years in Budapest. The goal? To explore new career opportunities, live an adventurous life as an American expat in Europe, and, possibly, hopefully, find her soulmate.

    This surprising and slightly scary journey begins on a fortune-teller’s advice, and while that may seem far-fetched to some, it’s just the ticket Jämsén needs to pull herself out of her daily rut and push herself in the way of a second chance at life and love.

    Can starting over be easy? 

    Jämsén is a bit skeptical about the soulmate search. Not that she doesn’t want to find someone, but she doesn’t think it could be that easy. Even if one considers moving halfway around the world and starting over to be a small task. The only thing she understands, both things are inevitable if one takes the first – and all the subsequent steps – in the general direction.

    Finding a soulmate requires more than a bit of divine providence, if not a miracle or two. Luckily for Jämsén, the fortune-teller told her what to look for along the way.

    While Odyssey of Love inevitably falls to comparisons with the “other” book and its movie, Jämsén’s journey takes several different roads to lead to her happy ending. And it’s those differences that make her trip a delight to accompany.

    Odyssey of Love isn’t merely a travelogue. 

    It’s the story of one American woman who leaves her life behind to experience as much as she can of living and working in another country. Moreover, living and working in a country with a vastly different history from the U.S. where English is not the first or even second language spoken.

    Jämsén navigates life in another culture in fits and starts, two steps forward and one step back, forming friendships that cause both cultural harmonies and cultural clashes – sometimes in the same conversations. She’s courageous and very human in her mistakes and her inevitable heartbreaks.

    Then, on September 11th, 2001, the United States underwent one devastating event after another, and Jämsén’s homesickness deepened. 

    While it can be said the story focuses on the author’s immersion in her temporarily adopted country and her search for love, the story has a spiritual aspect to it, as well. But the spiritualism of Odyssey of Love has a solid Western orientation, rather than the Eastern journeys of that other book. Linda searches for places and icons representing Mary’s journey from the Christmas nativity scene to her death in either Ephesus or Jerusalem.

    Odyssey of Love shines a light on a fascinating and very personal journey of one woman’s pursuit of her dreams to find the place and the person where she belongs. Her discoveries along the way, both the world she surrounds herself in and the internal musings of her own mind and heart, take readers right along with her.

    Readers who fell for the author’s journey of exploration in Eat – Pray – Love will be over the moon and halfway to the stars to follow along on Linda Jämsén’s Odyssey of Love.

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  • Crafting Words and Lassoing Jottings – Writing Advice from Jessica Page Morrell – A Chanticleer Writer’s Toolbox Post

    Crafting Words and Lassoing Jottings – Writing Advice from Jessica Page Morrell – A Chanticleer Writer’s Toolbox Post

    “I try to pull the language into such a sharpness that it jumps off the page. It must look easy, but it takes me forever to get it to look so easy. Of course, there are those critics — New York critics as a rule — who say, Well, Maya Angelou has a new book out and of course it’s good but then she’s a natural writer. Those are the ones I want to grab by the throat and wrestle to the floor because it takes me forever to get it to sing. I work at the language.” ~ Maya Angelou

    ~ Maya  Angelou Source: Source: The Paris Review Interviews: Volume IV

    Maya Angelou’s website: https://www.mayaangelou.com/

    Maya Angelou, her gift for crafting words has forever left us with some of the most inspirational and memorable quotes of our time. “Biography” Jan 29, 2021

    Writing Advice from Jessica Page Morrell – Lassoing the Jottings and Crafting Words

    I’ve been purging my office and as I toss old receipts and rearrange books I’m finding scraps of paper with scrawls and tidbits on them. So I’m lassoing all these jottings. A single word on the back of an envelope says ‘waft’. Now, waft is in my vocabulary, and I’ve used it in writing, but these lists always inspire me. Another envelope back includes: pinprick, squatter, fusty, quisling, shacky, gawk, wheedle, moonwalk, shirk, bupkis, wraith, servile, scuttle, torpor, badger. Because if you’re not constantly gathering words you’re not growing as a writer.

    “…if you’re not constantly gathering words you’re not growing as a writer. – Jessica Morrell

    My next step is to figure out where to record these snippets. If you’re an analogue type like I am, you might have notebooks stashed all over the place. In fact, I’ve decided to stash one in my car’s glove box. Wondering why I haven’t done this years ago since I often hear information on NPR that I scribble on my hand as I’m driving. I’ve written here before about keeping a writer’s notebook, a lens to the world. Some jottings will land in my current writer’s notebook, while others will end up in specific ongoing projects.

    Jessica’s Notebooks

    Ruminate Productively. Question Thought Cycles

    Another note says: Ruminate productively. Question thought cycles. This one struck me hard. There was a tragic death in our family 3 weeks days ago and during the final weeks of my niece’s life, my thoughts returned again and again to her suffering. And her parents’ suffering. And, of course, I suffered too, sad, worried for them all, grieving the unfairness of her shortened life. I also tracked memories along years of family events and unearthed painful memories and tracked over old scars. In other words, unproductive ruminations.

    Poetry

    Sometimes it felt like I needed a lifeline to yank me free of this painful undertow. So I’ve turned to poetry before falling sleep and reading verses during the day. Such solace. And I’m falling into the poems and marveling at the poet’s imagery and turns of thought. Poetry can teach all writers. Poetry can help heal bruised and shattered hearts.[Editor’s Note: See Links above for Maya Angelou]

    Poetry can teach all writers. Poetry can help heal bruised and shattered hearts. – Jessica Morrell

    Track Complicated Emotions and Contradictory Thoughts

    Here’s another morsel: Track complicated emotions and contradictory thoughts. Since I’ve been quarantining for about a century now I’m getting worn down from too much time spent inside my head. Some days thoughts go skittering into strange places which then scare up unexpected emotions. Not always welcome emotions. So, as I ‘hear’ unhelpful inner talk, I try to stop myself. Then I backtrack into whatever I was thinking or feeling. Slow it all down and linger there. Figure out where the thought originated. Listening in to a hidden (or noisy) part of myself. Then, as I’ve been telling myself for years, thoughts aren’t like the weather. I can do something about them; question or entertain them, discard, or act on them. Instead of allowing a storm to brew.

    If you’re not prone to rumination be on the lookout for these complicated emotions on a screen or while reading a novel. For example, don’t you love it when you witness a cocktail of emotions flicker across an actor’s face? Maybe as a painful realization dawns or a joyful understanding blooms. How would you write that? Sir Anthony Hopkins starring in The Remains of the Day as the fusty head butler is an excellent example of how tiny face muscles can express a wide range of emotions.

    “The Remains of the Day” by Kazuo Ishiguro – Stevens the Butler of Darlington Hall, played brilliantly by Anthony Hopkins.

    Contradictions

    But let’s get back to contradictions. I taught online workshops last fall and in one workshop on subplots I explained the potency of contradictions while writing fiction. Contradictory needs and wants (or desires) within your main characters create delicious conflict. In The Remains of the Day, Hopkin’s character Stevens is at war with the truth. He’s blinded by his loyalty to his employer, a Nazi sympathizer, and clings to his duties instead of risking emotional intimacy–needs he dare not admit to. His elderly father dies alone while Stevens tends to an important dinner party and ignores the housekeeper’s–played impeccably by Emma Thompson– interest in him. The film is based on The Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro and is written as a first-person account by Stevens, a sometimes unreliable narrator.

    You often see this dynamic at work in romance plots and subplots. For example, a woman is attracted to bad boy types, but deep down she longs for marriage, stability, and kids. This scenario played out in Bridget Jones Diary by Helen Felding where readers and viewers recognized what was best for Bridget, but she did not. Bridget was beginning a new year and diary by vowing to cut down on cigarettes, alcohol and calories. Also on her list was to find a stable man, but of course, chaos ensued in the form of a fling with a bad boy. He was played with aplomb by Hugh Grant in the hit film version, while she overlooked stable lawyer Patrick Darcy (Colin Firth) until it was almost too late.

    Bridget Jones and one of her issues – smoking.

    Or a former addict or alcoholic has become clean and sober. All is well, until he is somehow triggered and then slips back into the bottle or ends up visiting his dealer. Meanwhile, as your reader is begging “do not go into that liquor store. Do not screw this up.” And this means your reader might be feeling contradictory feelings too–sympathy for the addiction, but enraged at the character for buckling under pressure.

    Contradictions create suspense and tension. Stay tuned because I’m going to cover this in more depth in the future.

    And as an aside:  Villains MUST Deliver

    This note was scrawled on a legal pad as I was reading a recent client’s manuscript: Villains MUST deliver. If you plop a villain or villainous group into your story they need to embody some form of evil and profound threat. He/she/they cannot remain offstage throughout. If your villains don’t threaten or scare your protagonist up close and personal, then fix the bad guy or your plot.

    Immersive Reading Experience = Resonating with Readers

    These days my notebooks are filled with mannerisms and reactions from the novels I read. In my  editing work I notice that writers use the same emotional responses in their stories. Characters repeatedly look down, shrug, or are wide eyed. I read a novel recently where the author used ‘deadpanned’ five or six times. By the third deadpan, I was wincing.

    Another reason to study other writer’s techniques is to create a more immersive reading experience. If you nail aftermaths or the viewpoint character’s experiences they will resonate with readers. Such as: startled chuff of laughter, a brittle silence settled between them, staring at him with dead, dark eyes, she flinches, settling uncomfortably, his heart started clattering around in his chest.

    Write Your First Draft with Everything You Got

    Don’t worry about finding the perfect words, the right words on your first draft. Just get your story out of your brain and into words.

    Then put the whole thing away for a few weeks or months. Come back to your draft with fresh eyes to see if the story concept is worth your editing time. Meanwhile, start a new story while this one simmers on the proverbial back burner. Have you fallen in love for one or the other?

    Here are two links that may prove helpful in unspooling the story in your brain onto the page:

    Unspooling Your Story

    How to Write Your Story in Four Weeks

    Keep writing, keep dreaming, have heart. Jessica 

    Jessica Morrell is a top-tier developmental editor and a contributor to Chanticleer Reviews Media and to the Writer’s Digest magazine. She teaches Master Writing Craft Classes at the Chanticleer Authors Conference that is held annually along with teaching at Chanticleer writing workshops that are held throughout the year. 

     

     


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    Tools of the Editing Trade

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    A great way to get started is with our manuscript evaluation service. Here are some handy links about this tried and true service: https://www.chantireviews.com/manuscript-reviews/

    And we do editorial consultations. for $75.  https://www.chantireviews.com/services/Editorial-Services-p85337185

    Writer’s Toolbox

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    Writers Toolbox  a few more Helpful Links: 

    The INCITING INCIDENT: STORY, SETBACKS and SURPRISES for the PROTAGONIST – A Writer’s Toolbox Series from Jessica Morrell’s Editor’s Desk

    ESSENCE of CHARACTERS – Part One – From the Jessica Morrell’s Editor’s Desk – Writer’s Toolbox Series  

     

  • Beyond Balancing the Books: Sheer Mindfulness for Professionals in Work and Life by George Marino, CPA/CFP – Mindfulness, Healthy Lifestyles, Positive Transformation

    Beyond Balancing the Books: Sheer Mindfulness for Professionals in Work and Life by George Marino, CPA/CFP – Mindfulness, Healthy Lifestyles, Positive Transformation

    George Marino, a practicing CPA and Mindfulness Coach, explores the possibilities for sustainable positivity in one’s work-life through mindfulness principles and practices in his new book, Beyond Balancing the Books: Sheer Mindfulness for Professionals in Work and Life.

    It would be difficult to find a profession more fraught with detail, deadlines, and distress than a typical CPA. Applying to that particular realm the idea of mindful meditation is a challenge that author Marino has taken on because it is a process he has lived. He opens his book by comparing two CPAs and their approaches to life and work-life.

    Larry wakes up early, already stressed by the problems facing him at the office. Whenever he’s alone, he reaches for the nearest device to fill the silence; he is a Type A personality, driven and competitive. However, work increases his inner anxieties, fears, and self-doubts. Amy, by contrast, wakes at her usual time, feeling rested, starting the day with a positive mantra, enjoying breakfast with her family, and looking forward to the possibilities of helping others through her work skills, focusing on the client’s needs and feelings. Through these examples and many others, Marino illustrates basic tenets and techniques of mindfulness, a practice that, among other benefits, can reduce physical symptoms of stress.

    Marino has designed his mindfulness-based template around the phrase “beyond balancing the books,” or the three B’s.

    “Beyond” signifies the stillness and peacefulness that result from reining in the thought process by simply becoming aware of one’s surroundings. “Balancing” refers to the blending of “human” and “being,” that is, of one’s typical human physical state and the possibilities of a mental or spiritual realm that exists and can intermingle with, and enhance, one’s physical existence. “The books” represents our “accounting for what really counts” – finding higher purpose. Simple exercises, such as three minutes of deep breathing, provide a start in the right direction. Marino expands the practices to help readers examine their true feelings about troublesome situations. Doing so helps his clients to accept and allow their feelings to meld into larger, positive goals.

    Marino has a second career as a life coach, where he counsels those in his own profession and those outside of the accounting world. At One Heart Coaching, LLC, he employs images of the accountant’s crucially essential work tasks of preparing taxes and assisting in business management. His book is filled with a wide variety of wisdom, from the classical – Sufi poet Hafiz, Shakespeare, modern writer Eckhart Tolle (The Power of Now). Discovering and practicing mindfulness changed Marino’s life, and he desires to help as many individuals as possible.

    Readers will benefit from the many supplemental resources such as a “Mindfulness at Work Questionnaire for Professionals” and a reading list for further study. Marino’s guidebook is a rich mine of helpful advice for anyone seeking a calmer, more spiritually focused approach to life’s dilemmas. Highly Recommended!

     

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  • The SOMEWHERE I SEE YOU AGAIN by Nancy Thorne – Coming of Age YA, Vietnam War Era, Friendship/Adventure

    The SOMEWHERE I SEE YOU AGAIN by Nancy Thorne – Coming of Age YA, Vietnam War Era, Friendship/Adventure

    Nancy Thorne weaves a brilliant story that encompasses all of the outrageous and contradictory emotions of two young women in her YA novel, The Somewhere I See You Again.

    Set in eastern Canada, Thorne takes us back to the early 1970s when the Vietnam War was headlining the news. Hannah has her own war, though, and she has given it a name, Luke. It stands for leukemia, which has changed her life and colors her world as her mom battles cancer. 

    Hannah lives on Sloan Hill, the wrong side of town, where her family struggles to survive. Her mother’s battle with Luke leaves her weak and bedridden. Hannah must find a job to help out and pick up some of the lost income. To make matters worse, Hannah’s high school is being torn down, which means she and her best friend Stacy will attend Carver High and hobnob with the Burgess aristocracy. Hannah rides on Stacy’s social coattails as her friend’s quiet beauty opens doors and gains them entrance into the homes of the wealthy. 

    One of the many goals on Hannah’s list is to get inside her dream house, a mansion where her father works as the groundskeeper. Hannah learns that Christopher Holding lives in her dream house and thus begins her mission to set Stacy up with Chris and get invited to his big party. Once inside, she takes photos to share with her father but unwittingly captures images of Chris dealing drugs. Oops. 

    Stacy has her own set of problems.

    It’s only been a year since her father’s death, but her mother decides to become involved with a real creep – Mr. Callaghan, whose interests seem to expand beyond the attentions of Stacy’s mother and onto Stacy. When Mr. Callaghan becomes her mom’s fiancé, Hannah and Stacy know she’s marrying him for the security he brings, not for love. Stacy goes along with Hannah’s plan and becomes Chris’s girlfriend, even though she’s in love with Danny, a short-order cook who dreams of being a chef. She keeps Danny a secret because she knows Hannah would never approve.

    When Stacy needs money to help her mom, Hannah devises a plan to blackmail Chris for his drug money with the photos she took at his party. Because his dad is on the fast track to being a judge, pictures of his son dealing drugs would destroy his chances. The photos, it turns out, become leverage. The day the two girls decide to approach Chris, he is already gone. His father accepted a job across the continent in Vancouver, BC. 

    Nancy Thorne delivers her characters in high-resolution.

    Thorne develops a real schemer in Hannah, who goes into overdrive. Mr. Callaghan finds them both jobs in a swank hotel in Jasper and even gives them train fare. Instead, they hitchhike across Canada straight to Vancouver. Along the way, they meet a young American trying to avoid the draft. Things go from crazy to insane as Hannah and Stacy maneuver the travails of hitching cross-country to blackmail Chris. They survive a bear attack, forest fires, and scorching disappointments that will keep readers on the edge of their seats, all to the backdrop of music from the time. Hannah learns who her real friends are, and she comes to understand something more about the complicated world in which she lives.

    Nancy Thorne’s The Somewhere I See You Again will have readers laughing and crying and rooting for Hannah and Stacy as they brave the open roads of Canada during the Vietnam crisis era, searching for salvation and a better life. What they find, however, is so much more fulfilling. Highly recommended.

     

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    • Short Story Awards for Shorts, Novelettes, Novellas, and Short Story Collections Semi-Finalists – a Division of the 2020 CIBAs

      Short Story Awards for Shorts, Novelettes, Novellas, and Short Story Collections Semi-Finalists – a Division of the 2020 CIBAs

      The Short Story Awards recognize emerging talent and outstanding works in Short Stories, Novelettes, Novellas, and Short Story Collections and Anthologies. The Short Story Awards is a division of the Chanticleer International Book Awards program.

       

       

      The Chanticleer International Book Awards program discovers today’s best works. The Short Stories Awards discovers the Best New Shorts in Fiction and Narrative Non-Fiction.

      After several years of requests, the Chanticleer Int’l Book Awards program now offers a division for Short Fiction and Narrative Non-Fiction in 2020. Since it is a new division, we are still ironing out the proverbial wrinkles. However, it has proven to be quite popular, so we will continue to offer it in our book awards program.

      We are honored to announce the following authors and their works as the first Semi-Finalists of the Short Story Awards, a new division of the 2020 CIBAs.

      Green and Gold Short Stories Shorts Novelettes and Novellas Semi-Finalist Badges

       

      Congratulations to the first Semi-Finalists of The Short Stories

      Short Stories and Novelettes Categories 

      Historical Fiction (Chaucer/Goethe/Laramie) 

        • Ronald Canfield – Life’s Reflections – A Fateful Weekend
        • Kristie Clark – Dragon of the Sea
        • Shannon Pearson – The Broom
        • Marina Osipova  – From Stalin with Love
        • Kathryn Gauci – Code Name Camille 
        • Michelle Rene Magee – The Dodo Knight
        • Grendolyn Soleil – Snow Dust and Boneshine: The Chronicles of Granny Witch
        • Vali Benson – Blood and Silver
        • Alan E. Fleischauer – Just Another Morning

      Mystery & Suspense  (M&M/Clue)

        • J. J. Clarke – Dared to Fly
        • Charlie Lehman – Tiger
        • Ronald Canfield – Fate’s Intervention
        • Alan E. Fleischauer – Sherlock and the Tiger
        • Alan E. Fleischauer – Just Another Morning
        • Joanne Jaytanie – Reaching Hope, Dog Talk
        • Joanne Jaytanie – Christmas Chemistry, Forever Christmas in Glenville
        • Joanne Jaytanie – Twice As Bad, Miss Demeanor, P. I.  Series
        • James G. Skinner – The Room

      Out of This World Fiction (Cygnus/OZMA/Paranormal)

        • Grendolyn Soleil – Snow Dust and Boneshine: The Chronicles of Granny Witch
        • Lindy Ryan – Dead of Winter
        • Joanne Jaytanie – Reaching Hope, Dog Talk
        • Alexandrea Weis – Sisters of the Moon
        • Cheri Kay Clifton – Yesteryear’s Destiny
        • Nancy Thorne – Normal Come Christmas
        • Alan E. Fleischauer – The Birthday Gift
        • Andrew Dana Hudson and Jay Springett – In The Storm, A Fire
        • Sarena Ulibarri – Inviting Disaster
        • Robin Lee Lovelace – Savonne, Not Vonny
        • Viktoria Schlachta – Koozebanian Exile – A secret darker than the Black Sea
        • Patricia Theisinger – Joy In Four Parts
        • Jeremy Robertson – Trouble in Tinseltown: A Ghost Story
        • Jeremy Robertson – Haunters of Dreamer’s Den #4. Nap or Trap
        • Christopher Kezelos – The Sasquatch of Jackson Farm

      Fiction/Contemporary/Literary/Satire

        • Susan Lynn Solomon – Sabbath
        • Joanne Jaytanie – Reaching Hope, Dog Talk
        • Joanne Jaytanie – Christmas Chemistry, Forever Christmas in Glenville
        • Susan Lynn Solomon – Reunion
        • Charlie Lehman – Serve the People
        • Alan E. Fleischauer –  The Chalice
        • Jennifer L Heckman – Dancing Through Tears
        • V. P. Evans – N
        • V.P. Evans – W
        • Michelle Rene Magee – Danielle’s Inferno
        • Dennis M. Clausen – The Accountant’s Apprentice

      Chatelaine

        • Joanne Jaytanie – Reaching Hope, Dog Talk
        • Joanne Jaytanie – Christmas Chemistry, Forever Christmas in Glenville
        • Joanne Jaytanie – Miss Demeanor, P.I.
        • Vicki Batman – Raving Beauty
        • Richard Alan Schwartz – Trust? It’s All About Trust
        • Gail Meath – Fire Blossom 

      Short Story Collections

      Congratulations to the  first Short Story Collections  Semi-Finalists

      • Lawrey Goodrick – Odd One Out
      • Janet Oakley – Hilo Bay Mystery Collection
      • Sean Thomas Dwyer – Voices I Hear
      • Susan Lynn Solomon – T’was the Season
      • Jean Rover – And Then Spring Comes
      • Pierce Koslosky Jr. – A Week at Surfside Beach
      • Matthew Buscemi – The Shipwright and Other Stories
      • David W Thompson – ‘Possum Stew
      • Abbe Rolnick – Tattle Tales: Essays and Stories Along the Way
      • J. Nell Brown – Orphan Tree and the Vanishing Skeleton Key
      Chanticleer Blue Ribbons

      Blue Ribbon Award Winners for the 2020 Short Story Awards will be announced on June 5, 2021 at the annual CIBA Ceremonies that will be held at the Hotel Bellwether, Bellingham, Wash.

      We are now accepting entries into the 2021 SHORT STORY Awards, a division of the 2021 Chanticleer International Book Awards. 2021 Award Winners will be announced and recognized at the 2022 Chanticleer Authors Conference and the 2021 CIBA Ceremonies that will take place April 7 – 10, 2022, at the Hotel Bellwether, Bellingham, Wash.

       

      The 2021 FICTION SERIES Book Awards Winners will be announced on June 5, 2021 at the 2020 CIBA Winners Ceremonies that will take place at the the Hotel Bellwether, Bellingham, Wash.  

      We are now accepting entries into the 2021 FICTION BOOK SERIES Awards, a division of the 2021 Chanticleer International Book Awards. 2021 Award Winners will be announced and recognized at the 2022 Chanticleer Authors Conference and the 2021 CIBA Ceremonies that will take place April 7 – 10, 2022, at the Hotel Bellwether, Bellingham, Wash.

       

      As always, please do not hesitate to contact us by email with any questions, concerns, or suggestions at Chanticleer@ChantiReviews.com

      We will try our best to get back to you within 3 business days. Please keep in mind that we are on Pacific Standard Time.

      Keep on Creating! Keep on Writing! 

      The Chanticleer Team

       

    • SAXON HEROINES: A Northumbrian Novel (Women of Determination and Courage) by Sandra Wagner-Wright – British and Irish Biographical Literature, Historical Biographical Fiction, Women in Irish History

      SAXON HEROINES: A Northumbrian Novel (Women of Determination and Courage) by Sandra Wagner-Wright – British and Irish Biographical Literature, Historical Biographical Fiction, Women in Irish History

      Sandra Wagner-Wright’s Saxon Heroines: A Northumbrian Novel is a rich history of four women many centuries ago. 

      During a time of constant shifts in power across Northumbria and what would later become England, Christianity begins taking over as the religion of choice in the region. Kings from the area renounce Woden and embrace the new faith, which gives them the divine right to rule.

      Part of a series that tells of lesser-known women in history, Saxon Heroines concerns itself with the stories of four women in seventh century Northumbria. The novel splits into three parts, each part focusing on a different woman (women) of early Saxon history. First is Ethelberga of Kent, who becomes the new Queen of Northumbria in 624 and must convert the king to Christianity. The story shifts to Ethelberga’s daughter, Enfleda, in the second part; Enfleda’s daughter, Elfleda, in the third. Throughout the book, we witness Hildeburg’s role in King Edwin’s court to her holy life as the Abbess of Streoneshalh. Each of these women lived and died long ago, but they arguably changed the world. 

      Wagner-Wright transports her readers to a much more challenging way of life. 

      With few detailed historical records of seventh-century Northumbria, Wagner-Wright does the impossible task of fleshing out the little-known stories contained in the historical record. She takes what the ancient historians have recorded about these four women and tells their stories as accurately as possible. The women were, as Wagner-Wright writes, “present but not visible,” thus, the only things recorded about them were their titles, who they married, and who their children were. With these few facts, Ethelberga, Enfleda, Elfleda, and Hildeburg have unique voices – ones that have been silent for far too many years. 

      In her author’s note, Wagner-Wright adds historical context to the story’s events and reveals what happens in the years following the last chapter. Readers will do themselves a favor by reading through the front and back matter before digging into the meat. Just as important as the story itself, these portions will aid in the overall understanding of the text. A tale like Saxon Heroines based in history needs added material for readers to reference. 

      For lovers of historical and Christian fiction (and non-fiction), Saxon Heroines: A Northumbrian Novel could be the perfect book. Set in a time in which Christianity was taking hold across the region, the women of Saxon Heroines each play a pivotal role in the making of history.